for your first time to draw pastry it looks pretty damn awesome and realistic! and your likes are so thin and smooth. i want to know how to make lines like that, so mine look like that and not black and bulky.
THE PASTRY LOOKS SO REAL! (If I hadn't just eaten some I would go for more *p*))
The straberry is the best I've seen!! Really realistic~~~! But yet it still somehow manages to blend perfectly with the anime stylized art~~! <3 thats true magic~~! That girl is really adorable >////< I really love the way you did her eyes!